Your last render is my favorite because of the boldness of the linework, and I think the gradient of the colors is pushed the farthest. Keep working on pushing that gradient farther, because the scanner takes away a lot of the detail.
Your top one is by far your best, you have good reflection on the outside and nice job experimenting. The top one is successful because you controlled the color. It doesn't look like you were just coloring but rather rendering.
Your top one is the nicest rendering, I think. You did a good job of only using a couple shades of the same color, but images three and four have some funky geometry going on and it's hard to tell what's intentional and what isn't. Ellipses are tough though, so I think you did a good job.
When you have a pretty simple form shnazz up the color, maybe add some red to the shady areas and yellow to highlights. That might be fine artsy though, maybe just more complex colors.
maybe throw in a logo and set up the composition
ReplyDeleteTop and bottom perspectives are the most dynamic. try to give most drawing an interesting perspective like those two.
ReplyDeleteChartreuse!
ReplyDeleteYour last render is my favorite because of the boldness of the linework, and I think the gradient of the colors is pushed the farthest. Keep working on pushing that gradient farther, because the scanner takes away a lot of the detail.
ReplyDeleteYour top one is by far your best, you have good reflection on the outside and nice job experimenting. The top one is successful because you controlled the color. It doesn't look like you were just coloring but rather rendering.
ReplyDeleteYour top one is the nicest rendering, I think. You did a good job of only using a couple shades of the same color, but images three and four have some funky geometry going on and it's hard to tell what's intentional and what isn't. Ellipses are tough though, so I think you did a good job.
ReplyDeleteWhen you have a pretty simple form shnazz up the color, maybe add some red to the shady areas and yellow to highlights. That might be fine artsy though, maybe just more complex colors.
ReplyDeleteI think if you concentrate on details such as part lines and double lines around the compasses' face it would add to the products. Way to be.
ReplyDeleteShadows or a vignette would help pop the objects out.
ReplyDeletei agree with kendal and justine... the pages seem kind of blank, and throwing in a logo, shadow and vignette would really help these renders
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